A story from Friday, January 6, 2012

Ashes and Sparks

When her arm touched his as she walked past him at the service, her heart beat faster than it did in two decades of her marriage.

2 Critiques to "Ashes and Sparks"

  1. The following was written by Julide on January 6, 2012

    Amazing title! It almost tells much more than the story itself.

  2. The following was written by Fiona on January 10, 2012

    i like the two decades of a slow heartbeat!