A story from Thursday, September 16, 2010

Anybody home?

He looked seventy, and his shoes looked older. “Can I have a bag of popcorn?” he pleaded, his neck craning over the counter. No one came.

2 Critiques to "Anybody home?"

  1. The following was written by Juliet on February 17, 2011

    Well done. In so few words, this story really cuts into my heart.

  2. The following was written by Amy on September 16, 2012

    Awww… this made me so sad