A story from Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Animal Rhymes

He got detention for his awful poem. “Larry Lizard spat and swore, snuck up on koala and pooed on his paw.” His mother stifled a giggle.

5 Critiques to "Animal Rhymes"

  1. The following was written by Kim Tatam on September 7, 2011

    Chuckle! Nicely done Gayle.

  2. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 7, 2011

    LOL! Gayle, if I was that mom, I’d be stifling a giggle as well.

    Well done!

  3. The following was written by Evert Asberg on September 13, 2011

    Many mothers like his, happily. Funny.

  4. The following was written by Milo James Fowler on September 18, 2011

    He should have earned an A for alliteration!

  5. The following was written by C.E. Hyun on September 25, 2011

    Aww! This made me chuckle. Especially love the opening line. :)