A story from Wednesday, January 19, 2011

An Unhealthy Relationship

“You keep leaving. I can’t trust you.” I stared out the window. My mother lowered her newspaper. “Don’t talk to the snow. It isn’t healthy.”

5 Critiques to "An Unhealthy Relationship"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 20, 2011

    A surprising twist. Well written.

  2. The following was written by Karen King on January 20, 2011

    LOVE LOVE it. Srsly. then I saw who wrote it. :)

  3. The following was written by C.E. Hyun on January 26, 2011

    Aww, love this. Sweet ode to snow. :)

  4. The following was written by dana on January 28, 2011

    This is brilliant! Well done. As I stare at the two feet of snow and the five foot drifts in my back yard…and pray for the disappointment and betrayal described here. :)

  5. The following was written by Cassie McDaniel on January 29, 2011

    Thanks for all the comments! You guys inspire me.