11 Critiques to "Alone?"

1. Amy Tripp's critique:

   Oh! That gave me shivers. I think I’d be doing more running than praying. LOL. Nicely done!

   This critique was added on October 26, 2011 at 8:09 am

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2. Milo James Fowler's critique:

   Ewww! Nice.

   This critique was added on October 26, 2011 at 12:23 pm

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3. MindChirp's critique:

   Sending ripples down the spine!

   This critique was added on October 27, 2011 at 7:30 am

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4. Steve Ramey's critique:

   Great lead-in to Halloween. Really nice.

   This critique was added on October 27, 2011 at 2:10 pm

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5. Stacy Post's critique:

   Ack! Yes, perfect for Halloween. Makes me want to check all the nooks and crannies at home. Well done, Madeline!

   This critique was added on October 27, 2011 at 2:19 pm

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6. Madeline Mora-Summonte's critique:

   Amy – thanks! I scared myself as I was writing it.

   Milo – there aren’t many situations where “ewww” is a compliment but this is one of them so…thanks!

   Steve – thanks! I’m enjoying this whole theme week.

   This critique was added on October 27, 2011 at 2:21 pm

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7. Madeline Mora-Summonte's critique:

   Thanks, Stacy! Better check in the closet and under the bed, too…

   This critique was added on October 27, 2011 at 2:23 pm

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8. Lydia Gray's critique:

   Creepy! Perfect for Halloween

   This critique was added on October 27, 2011 at 6:16 pm

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9. Madeline Mora-Summonte's critique:

   Thank you, MindChirp and Lydia! Glad you both enjoyed it.

   This critique was added on October 29, 2011 at 3:15 pm

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10. Sealey Andrews's critique:

    Wow, really tense moment you’ve created in just a few words.

    This critique was added on November 2, 2011 at 12:10 am

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11. Madeline Mora-Summonte's critique:

    Thanks, Sealey!

    This critique was added on November 2, 2011 at 3:30 pm

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