He blinks through bourbon. The road undulates like a whore’s tongue. He falls to his knees, forgiveness in the beam of oncoming headlights.
This is my first time here at One Forty Fiction and I’m thrilled!
Your carefully chosen words tell a much bigger story. Nice one!
Thanks, Shelley! Glad you stopped by.
Strong emotion in this piece. Deeply felt.
A well told story. small yet complete.
Thank you, Lisa and Gayle! I appreciate your comments.
Okay, WOW. Nicely done, Madeline.
Stacey and Milo – thanks for stopping by!
Strong imagery in this story. Sad message successfully conveyed.
Nicely done! Love the punch at the end.
Jan B and Sally – thank you so much for your comments!