A story from Thursday, May 3, 2012

A House

The orange sign says don’t go in, but momma knows better. We make our beds and wake to a cop in the morning. Momma cries and we leave again.

2 Critiques to "A House"

  1. The following was written by Victoria on May 10, 2012

    Oh my goodness, an unexpected and sad ending.

  2. The following was written by Antonio S. Franco on July 19, 2012

    The use of the child’s point of view gives it a devastating impact.
    Very well done.

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